The Experts: Sum Up the Story in One Paragraph - To have an idea of the beginning, middle and end of the story following this format:
- The Story Outline exposition leads up to a climax; rising action
events. The Climax is the turning point brought by the Conflict.
- The Falling Action is where the story begins to conclude.
- The Resolution is a satisfying ending – the story is concluded.
- Lastly make an Outline using the beginning, middle and end of the story
fill in the story and include conflict or obstacle that the main
character has to resolve.
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Meleik’s first story which is the Fighters of Justice Saves their Mother and “Learns to Never Give Up” was originally wrote as:
1st Paragraph
The Power Rangers couldn’t find their way back home. They fight for justice. And they did find their way back home. But when they tried to get back home something stopped them. They broke it it was a real robot.
2nd Paragraph
And the gates opened and closed and they jumped over them. Because they did not know how to stop the gates from opening and closing.
3rd Paragraph
And when they started to open the door it started on magic because the Werewolf threw magic on everything when he came in. When they saw their mom, someone tried to kill their mom. Then they fight then his name was Werewolf Tiger.
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Meleik’s rising actions were the difficulty of finding their way home which lead to the conflict of Robots fighting them and then the gates were not opening up. The falling action begins when they reach their door, they saw their mom and concludes with the fight to save their mother.
The story is a little different now because Meleik later added where the Fighters of Justice were before they got lost, he changed the names of the characters and added more sentences to fill in gaps.
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